JBeat2k9's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Awesome Kirby]

You said it yourself.

"I have played a Kirby game 4 years ago."

Maybe you should have played it again recently to learn more about it before you go ahead and dedicate 6 hours of your time to making something about it that may be inaccurate.

This is a good first effort, but you need to work on the humour, jokes and punchlines.

The "Awesome series" is a well made series that looks in to the fads behind the most popular games. This one seems a little irrelevant if I'm honest.

Like I said though, good first effort. I'd like to see what else you're capable of. Maybe spend more time on the writing, and you may be forgiven for the bog-standard animation. There are flash animations out there that look like they were drawn by a 7 year old with parkinsons, but because the humour was "relevant" and genuinely funny, it is overlooked that they've spend little to no time on the actually art/animations. Can't wait to see more from you as you progress.

Enjoy what you do, too. That's most important. Spend a little more time on the little things, and you'll feel really proud of what you've delivered to us. If you cut corners and leave things out that you consider important, but don't want to put the time in to make, you'll end up feeling "meh" about what you've submitted. Are you genuinely proud of this flash? Feel like you could have done things a little differently? Pull it from NG and work on it a little longer. You won't regret it when you've reached the front page. ^_^

sweetcommando responds:

you're right. what you just wrote made me think about this. i will work on a flash for a longer time now. 1-4 months maybe. thank you, next time you'll see me on the front page :)

[Imaginary Coolness]

Hilarious!

I can definitely see this making Daily 1st. Awesome animation, great voice acting, the Gay-Cow idea was flawless, and the whole thing is very well done. Kudos, brother. Kudos.

[SS - Human History 3]

huh?

Isn't the blue-ish glow around the Earth called "The Atmosphere"? O_o

RiverJordan responds:

Bitta both in there i think ;)

[Cheromanchequois]

Awesome.

I LOL'd so hard at the prias in the background at the end. xD Great work. The animation was flawless, and the voice acting was spot on. Loved it. Well done.

[Sean and Such Ep. 7]

Hilarious!

Awesome movie. This pretty much says it all for all of the pet stores round here in England. Brilliant animation, fantastic quality audio, and the voice acting was great. Can't wait to see more from you.

[MK2: kustom fatalities]

Great work.

Awesome job. I love how you've stayed very loyal to the franchise, and kept the fatality styles similar to the original fatality move set. They exploded like they did in the original game, they got dismembered like they did in the original game. Great work. Would love to see more, maybe with some humour thrown in there. Maybe make up some Friendships, Kari-Kiris, or Animalities?

[Eight Bit Strange 5]

Short, but vy, VERY sweet.

Awesome work, dude. Loved every second of it. I'm glad I stuck around after the initial "END" screen, too, as I'd have missed one of the funniest parts of the animation's punchline. Amazing. Can't wait to see more.

[Getting wheat Minecraft]

Awesome.

I love minecraft, I love flash. You just made a very humorous story about what it's like for EVERYONE new to minecraft, and I'm sure that 99% of players can relate to it. I hope you make more. Seriousl. I'd watch them all. Also, I'd like to see how you progress as an artist.

[Family Guy: portal]

Brilliant.

Although simple, it was brilliant. You captured two of the funniest things in family guy and put them in a flash animation. Peter's laugh, and the scene where he hurts his knee. Genius Kudos. I'd like to see more Family Guy Portal flashes, if you're up to making some more.

[Computer (The Maze)]

Keep it up!

Nice work! ^_^ There's nothing worse than playing a game, and then having it SCREAM at you when your volume is up most of the way. xD It's happened to me a few times. Anyway, good job. The animation is pretty good, and the overall presentation is great. You could have spent a little more time making the keyboard look a bit more like a keyboard tho. xD

JackionElliot responds:

yeah I kinda rushed the keyboard