OH GOD!
THE GOOGLY EYES! O_O
I quite literally lost all sense of composure when that happened. Thank you for the laughs! Hilarious series! It's a shame that some dude has stolen the views from the first Failtalities flash you made. :( It has like 2.8m views now.
Anyway, hilarious flash. Can't wait to see the rest of your stuff!
You said it yourself.
"I have played a Kirby game 4 years ago."
Maybe you should have played it again recently to learn more about it before you go ahead and dedicate 6 hours of your time to making something about it that may be inaccurate.
This is a good first effort, but you need to work on the humour, jokes and punchlines.
The "Awesome series" is a well made series that looks in to the fads behind the most popular games. This one seems a little irrelevant if I'm honest.
Like I said though, good first effort. I'd like to see what else you're capable of. Maybe spend more time on the writing, and you may be forgiven for the bog-standard animation. There are flash animations out there that look like they were drawn by a 7 year old with parkinsons, but because the humour was "relevant" and genuinely funny, it is overlooked that they've spend little to no time on the actually art/animations. Can't wait to see more from you as you progress.
Enjoy what you do, too. That's most important. Spend a little more time on the little things, and you'll feel really proud of what you've delivered to us. If you cut corners and leave things out that you consider important, but don't want to put the time in to make, you'll end up feeling "meh" about what you've submitted. Are you genuinely proud of this flash? Feel like you could have done things a little differently? Pull it from NG and work on it a little longer. You won't regret it when you've reached the front page. ^_^
you're right. what you just wrote made me think about this. i will work on a flash for a longer time now. 1-4 months maybe. thank you, next time you'll see me on the front page :)
huh?
Isn't the blue-ish glow around the Earth called "The Atmosphere"? O_o
Bitta both in there i think ;)
Keep it up!
Nice work! ^_^ There's nothing worse than playing a game, and then having it SCREAM at you when your volume is up most of the way. xD It's happened to me a few times. Anyway, good job. The animation is pretty good, and the overall presentation is great. You could have spent a little more time making the keyboard look a bit more like a keyboard tho. xD
yeah I kinda rushed the keyboard
Awesome!
That was blliant. "HERRO!" xD
I'm going to be quoting this for weeks now.
Herrro! haha thanks for the review man!
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