After reading the author comments section, I started enjoying this piece a hundred times more. I can imagine a video/flash/movie where all you see is a person standing there, everything going wrong around them at the time of day passes them by. The snooze button hit one too many times, the "Oh, ffs." look on their face as they shower late, drive to work stuck in traffic, get to work late, in boss' office with the same expression as they get chewed out, the copier blasting toner all over them, the coffee break surrounded by chatty gossipers, being asked to work late, working late, getting home just in time to go to bed, lather, rinse and repeat.
I genuinely hope that someone uses this with your description in mind. It's truly brilliant, and you can tell that you've had genuine training as a student of jazz. You can hear the influences, but you've still managed to make something very original.
Thank you for making this.